You added a lot of good evidence into your outline and made it very specific. That's great, but its a little difficult to understand what all is going in to where. If you understand it then that's fine though. You are also missing the conclusion section which is an important part, but hopefully you'll figure that out.
Hey! Rough couple of weeks so super late review, but here’s my review of your content outline (:
I like your topic, it’s really engaging and so many people can relate to it. You also implement the conventions of a podcast even just in your outline. I did a podcast for project 2 and adapting to the conventions were difficult for me but it seems like you understood it really well.
I’m really curious how you are going to incorporate evidence. Are you going to reference your sources in your podcast? Are you going to include some in the description? What is your evidence? How does it support your argument? Is it opinions? Statistics?
I like your ideas but some seem to be too short to understand. Are the compadres other characters on your podcast? Are they different sources of evidence? I’m sure these things will become more apparent in your final podcast!
You added a lot of good evidence into your outline and made it very specific. That's great, but its a little difficult to understand what all is going in to where. If you understand it then that's fine though. You are also missing the conclusion section which is an important part, but hopefully you'll figure that out.
ReplyDeleteHey! Rough couple of weeks so super late review, but here’s my review of your content outline (:
ReplyDeleteI like your topic, it’s really engaging and so many people can relate to it. You also implement the conventions of a podcast even just in your outline. I did a podcast for project 2 and adapting to the conventions were difficult for me but it seems like you understood it really well.
I’m really curious how you are going to incorporate evidence. Are you going to reference your sources in your podcast? Are you going to include some in the description? What is your evidence? How does it support your argument? Is it opinions? Statistics?
I like your ideas but some seem to be too short to understand. Are the compadres other characters on your podcast? Are they different sources of evidence? I’m sure these things will become more apparent in your final podcast!