I found my sentences to be effective in establishing the journalistic mood, while still retaining a good relation with the audience with the use of emphatic diction. Towards the end of the essay, some of my sentences seemed to run on or contain redundancies, and I made sure to remove them before recording. Rules For Writers helped with this as I was able to replace openings and run-on sentences with things that made more sense and made the project generally more interesting as a whole.
The different sections of the essay were marked with quick fades to black, and I thought I did an effective job at making each segment stand on its own from an informative standpoint. I use some pretty high-end vocabulary here, which doesn't really evoke any problems aside from the occasional ineligible slur of dialogue that I have to rerecord.
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